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We are sometime tourists,
forever wanderers
in open topped buses
tie-dyed amongst Mercedes’.
Stringy haired,
smelling of campfire smoke,
our pockets filled with menthol cigarettes,
tin whistles,
and skipping stones.  
We find ourselves
basking in the glow of laughter
under the dripdrip
of cave music.  
Beers and sticky chocolate bars
fill our tattered canvas bags,
alongside leather flip flops,
discarded for bare footed expeditions
amongst spiders
bloodchilling streams
and daisy chains.
Have just discovered this- I wrote it last year in the Lake District.
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The suggester says, "Lake Windermere by ~tangerinedreams utilizes concrete imagery in such an exceptional manner. It definitely tantalizes the reader's senses!" ( Suggested by fllnthblnk and Featured by lovetodeviate )
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rider-on-the-storm Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
wonderful
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SanguineLord Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The level of description is what really hits the spot for me.
The structure combined with the barrage of images makes this so readable and charming.

And for what it's worth, I've been one of those tourists =)
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krystlcelebi Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Student
ah windemere is awesome right? did you know the only lake in the LAKE district is bassenthwaite?
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TheObviousChild Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009
Dude, you got a DD! :heart:!!!
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LumiereFonce Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2009
I truly enjoyed reading this. Definitely a peice for reminiscing.
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ketene Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2008  Student Photographer
This was really riveting and sensual to read.
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vampyric-amoeba Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2008   Photographer
It sounds like me and my friends.
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Hot-Sauce-Vixxen Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2008
It's beautiful. I could illustrate it from only one line. I think I may, and I will link back to you if I do. Hope that's okay. :)
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tangerinedreams Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2008
Of course! What a compliment!
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Hot-Sauce-Vixxen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2008
I will definitely link back to y'all. ^3^
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